Hi this is my 100 word story it looks short but its actually 100 words if you like you can check for your self.
In the strange word there lived a girl named Willow she was mysterious and strange she had no home she had no family she knew no one she had nothing she had black hair hazel eyes, rip clothes she was lost in the nowhere on earth she was surrounded by enormous trees as she finds her way out of this forest she heard a noise from the trees she look carefully she ignore it and walk away until a bird pop out and came shooting towards her she runs away until she trips over by a root in the dirt…
Kia Orana Danica
ReplyDeleteIt's me Justus from Rm 7,
I really like your 100 word story I like how you described that Willow had no home and family. But also I think you can put like brackets on your title. Then make a name for the story and put it in the brackets.
This also reminds me of the writing that my class did about the present it's about a boy and a dog.
Did you like doing this writing?
Bye
Justus🥥🥥
Hi, Danica. I really enjoyed the dark, mysterious mood you gave to your story. Your writing reminded me of mist and moonlight. Are you going to publish the expanded version? Ahiahi marie.
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